“What is the time there?”, Mom asked.
“Ten thirty”, he said looking at his watch.
So desperately he wished their watches to tell the same time.
Unlike humans, thoughts are hard to kill.
“What is the time there?”, Mom asked.
“Ten thirty”, he said looking at his watch.
So desperately he wished their watches to tell the same time.
Beautiful.
But in my honest opinion, ‘they’ would’ve sounded better than ‘he’.
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Thanks 😀 Will improve the next time
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